Question by John K: Can you guys help me with my story?
Alright I love writing and I wanted to write a screenplay. Heres the plot and I just want to hear opinions about my story. Please be honest.
It’s called Tone, Tune, to Deff. Haha I just thought it was a cool name
A rebellious teen, Anna Young, is court-ordered to carry out community service after having been caught smoking weed numerous times at her high school in Pennsylvania. As demanded she must complete her service hours at The Park School for the Deaf with the incentive that she will have do time in prison if she fails to do so. After help from guidance counselor at the Park School, Holly McKinney, she quickly catches on to the communication system of ASL. Anna becomes aware of the difficult life of inaudible children and with that finds the ideal perception of the loss of innocence and the core value of giftedness (or being fortunate). Anna finds she has more in common with these kids than she could ever back at the “speaking world”at home and in the process, she falls for Junior heart-throb JJ Waters; a quiet, calm/cool, sweetheart teenage deaf boy, whom everyone adores for being friendly. At first, he is not fond of her, as he feels she is just someone who has to “help” them out. However as time progresses, they fall in situations where they each learn a thing or two about one another. They speak through sign language and in abstract love, yet their relationship ultimately grows into a deep and reassuring love that leaves both worlds speechless. After wanting to hear Anne’s voice towards the end, he decides to get a cochlear surgery, which is a very dangerous and risky procedure. JJ dies after trying to receive one. The year ends and she has a new mindset and a new outlook on life.
I sort of rushed the ending, because it was getting to long. Is it good?
“hearing loss help”
Best answer:
Answer by Thorn in her side
Bad title, good story. But its the same as love is blind really
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